It's finally here: Query Time.
This is the version I'm entering the race with. Hopefully, it's compelling enough to entice an agent to ask for more.
Deep breath.
Et voilà...
In 2042, dreams come true. So do nightmares.
Ever since a shift in reality
thirty years ago, peoples' dreams and nightmares come alive, bringing with them
chaos and destruction. Monsters ravage cities, bottomless chasms split roads,
houses shrink, and gold rains from the sky. The possibilities are limitless,
unpredictable and often deadly.
Eden Maybrey is a Los Angeles
based dream hunter whose job is to eliminate these ’shades’. When longtime
friend Sean tasks her with hunting down an evil doppelgänger of himself, Eden
soon finds she is outmatched. She teams up with Vaughn Taylor, a hunter who
goes to dangerous lengths to kill every shade he encounters.
Before they can apprehend him,
the doppelgänger kidnaps Eden's sister. He threatens to kill her unless Eden
publicly exposes her deepest, darkest secret: she herself is a shade. If this
information comes to light, being chased by every shade hunter in the city will
be the least of Eden's problems. Her 'sister', the young woman to whom Eden
owes her very existence, will be sentenced to life in prison for harboring a
shade.
NIGHTMARE CITY is a standalone urban fantasy novel with series potential, complete at 95.000 words.
I'm a bilingually raised German whose dreams thankfully don't manifest in reality, but do occasionally come true in the more original sense: I recently had the good fortune of having two German short stories included in BACKNANG STORIES (publisher: Leseratten Verlag), an anthology with stories of my home town, Backnang (Germany), published in October 2014.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Pia Newman
Neuköllner Strasse 8
71229 Leonberg
Germany
Phone: 0049 / (0)1578 - 77 66 818
Email: newman.pia@gmail.com
As someone who's read the manuscript I can vouch that it's as well written as this query letter. Pia, you remain my inspiration!
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